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Honeymoon in Paradise by readingmama (@vampiremama).

Monday, April 30, 2012.




















Pairing: ExB

Rating: M

Status: Complete.

Warnings: Lemons, so NC-17



Summary: Bella is on her honeymoon when a storm hits and she is tossed off the boat along with her husband. When she awakens on a desert island she is rescued by a beautiful angel with crimson eyes. Lemon included.

Honeymoon in Paradise by readingmama (@vampiremama).

"Wow Jake this is amazing!" I said gushing over our tiny cabin.

"Anything for you, my wife" he replied collecting me in his massive arms.

I took a moment to look at his face. He was a good foot taller than me standing at six foot seven. His dark copper skin looked beautiful in contrast to my pasty white.

Jacob and I had been married for six days. He had booked a surprise honeymoon for us and I was ecstatic. I had never left our tiny town of Forks and with our limited funds I never really expected to. Jacob ran a small mechanics shop in La Push, the reservation he grew up on just outside of Forks. At twenty years old I was already teaching high school at Forks High, but we weren't exactly rolling in the dough.


Is how this brilliantly creative one-shot by readingmama begins. It’s a sweet tale of love, even when things get tough and the focus is directed elsewhere. Bella is excited to spend the time with her husband, enjoying her first time out of Forks and eager for the chance to spend it with the man she loves.


But the story quickly takes a drastic turn, and things don’t look so good for our happy couple.

"Come on Bells, it's not safe out here," he said just as lightening lit up the sky as if to illuminate his point.

"Okay, on the count of three we run," I said preparing myself for the sprint.

"Alright, One….Two…"

On three the lightning struck again and I jumped before running. Jake kept close to me but kept pulling me closer and closer to the rail. Before I knew it both of my feet shot out from under me and Jake made a motion to grab for me. It took only seconds but it played out in slow motion. One of Jacob's hands grabbed the railing as my body slid out underneath the bars. Jake let go of the bar to grab me but we both ended up tossed into the water.

The waves crashed over us as I tried to keep my head above water.

"Jake!" I screamed, looking frantically around for my new husband.

"Bella!" I heard but couldn't see.

I felt a weight hit my shoulder and I thrashed my body around in panic. I whipped my body around to see Jake grabbing hold of me.

"Just hold on," he said.

The waves were so high that I could no longer see the boat. I started crying in the realization that it would likely be hours before anyone knew we were missing. And then it would be too late. We would surely drown by then.

Jacob is nowhere to be found, and Bella fears the worst when she washes up ashore, however, she soon has more pressing matters, such as survival. And this leads to our introduction to Edward.

Beautiful wasn't a strong enough word for him, he was luminescent. His wild copper hair stuck out in every direction. His skin was unusually pale and flawless. He wore only a small loin cloth and I could see the definition in his back as he led me through the forest. I wanted him to turn around; I wanted to see my angel's eyes.

I stumbled a few times before my angel let out a huff. My head was still pounding and I was losing consciousness again. I felt myself fall but I never hit the ground. Cool arms swept me up as blackness enveloped me again.

Vampmama, keeps Stephenie’s vampire characteristics, with Edward sparkling in the sun and having blood red eyes, but she also brings a tenderness that offsets his strong, dominant, fierce character, in a good way.


It’s ironic and a little funny though, that Bella thinks she’s dead, and considers Edward to be her ‘angel’. The last thought before I passed out again was how strange it was that my angel would have eyes the shade of blood.


And then, we share Bella’s guilt, as she dreams and remembers her husband, still lost at sea. She’s conflicted and upset, and doesn’t know how to feel. On the one hand, she feels guilty over the fact that she’s not mourning her husband’s death, but at the same time she’s enjoying being with Edward.

"Bella," he said lowering himself down to where I sat.

"Yes Edward," I replied breathily.

"Do you like it here with me?" he asked. The question was unexpected and it took me off my guard. I didn't answer at first because I wasn't sure of the answer.

Did I like it here with Edward? I hadn't thought of it up until now. I had just assumed that I was stuck here with no way off the island and I had become content with that realization. But when I thought about it, I was rather happy with Edward. I enjoyed his company. He had talked to me about my life, he wanted to know everything. The only topic he did not talk to me about was Jake. He knew little to nothing about my husband and I was ok with that. That seemed like a different life, one that I needed to leave in the past. But was I happy here? If someone came to rescue me right now would I want to stay with Edward? The answer to me was clear.

"Yes," I answered, completely sure. His face broke out into a smile that lit up his eyes.

"May I ask you something else?" His voice was suddenly unsure again.

"Anything," I prompted.

"May I kiss you?"


And as Bella comes to terms with her budding feelings, other urges are unlocked and given into, in a scene that’s beautifully written and tender.


And then Edward gets a little shock, as do we.

He pulled out and rolled over as not to crush me. He took a deep breath in and then bolted into a sitting position.

"Are you alright?" he asked.

"Of course Edward, all that screaming was a good thing you know," I said feeling partially delirious.

"But there was no blood," he stated confused.

"Blood?" I asked confused and then it dawned on me, "that only happens when you're a virgin. I was married to Jake."

"Married?" he asked.

"Yeah," I said trying to think of how to explain it, "like a mate, he was my mate."

Edward's eyes darkened and he refused to look at me.

[…]

The thought of my angel abandoning me here to live without him caused my body to wretch. Edward felt me movements and gingerly set me down.

"What is the matter?" he asked. I looked at him incredulously. "Bella?"

"You are… g-going to… leave me h-here. What did I do wrong? Please… don't leave me a-alone," I choked out between sobs. Edward grabbed my face between his hands and his face softened.

"No, no sweet girl. I won't leave you here, I love you and I would do anything to protect your honor."

I was confused by his statement. He loved me? And what did running halfway around the island have to do with my honor? I heard a throat clear and I looked up startled.


The closing to this fic may seem cruel or blunt to some, but it is a fair, well thought out response that leaves you satisfied, and then it ends on a sweet soothing note.


"How did you know that I would be your mate? I mean how did you know that Jake would bring who you needed?"

"I didn't," he responded, "I asked Jacob to bring me a pretty girl with brown hair and big eyes. I asked him for a girl pure and sweet. I did not know at the time but I asked for you. If he had brought me anyone else I know now that girl would have been dinner." I shivered at the thought. "I was prepared to wait for the right one, no matter how long it took. I was lucky enough to receive you on the first try."





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When the Night Comes by Drizl

Tuesday, April 24, 2012.

When The Night Comes By Drizl
Don't leave anything on your list Jasper. Live the life you want, not the one everyone expects. If you think about it, settling ain't really living. Can Jasper find the life he wants during the light of day or is it best left in the dark ExJ/SLASH/AU/AH
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Complete
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6153886/1/When_the_Night_Comes


This story starts out with Jasper waking up in a strange place, with someone he doesn't know...again. His phone is ringing and whoever it is just won't stop. He answers it and is surprised to hear Alice Brandon's voice. She tells him his mom is terminally ill, and doesn't have alot of time. If he wants to see her he needs to come home now. Jasper knew she was sick, but he's avoided everything for so long. After hanging up from Alice, Jasper's hit with the memories, memories he's tried to bury deeply or forget all together. No amount of alcohol, drugs or sex has worked. He still has it bad for Edward Cullen, and he truly fears what going home might mean.


Five years ago, Jasper, his twin sister Rose, and their mother Susan Hale move to Forks. The town welcomes them with open arms, Jasper's talent at football has not gone unnoticed here. They're all hoping that he can help their team finally go to the championship. He meets and becomes friends with Emmett and Edward. Emmett is soon very taken with Rose, and there's just something about Edward, something that both excites and scares Jasper. They go to a party at the beach before school starts, and he notices Edward acting sort of weird, he can't put his finger on it. One minute they're talking football, then he's shocked at what happens next....


"With your arm, we should crush them," he said bringing out the crooked grin again.

"Yeah? Do you think we'll be able to hook-up on a few long pass routes?"

His face lit up. "Hell yeah, they have one decent cornerback, but I'm faster than him." He laughed and lunged at me, but I was able to slip out of his grasp. We ran down the beach laughing and taunting each other. He finally tripped me up, falling on top of me. His green eyes were almost black as he hovered over me. Strange sensations fluttered in my stomach. Must be the fucking Jack mixing with the beer I had been drinking until Edward fucking Cullen leaned forward and brushed his lips against mine.

My entire body seized up. Was this actually happening?

"Oh fuck," he muttered. "I'm so sorry...I didn't mean...oh fuck...please Jasper...don't...I gotta go.."

He jumped off me, disappearing down the beach before I could even sit up. I ran my finger across my lips and groaned. Edward Cullen had just sort of kissed me and fuck...I kinda liked it...what the fuck did...I jumped up and started sprinting down the beach."


This is just the beginning of the relationship that blooms between the two boys. Jasper has only been with girls before, so he's very confused. But he's very attracted to Edward, and when they're alone, he seems to be all that Edward wants. Things aren't the same when others are around. This kills Jasper, he truly doesn't know what to believe. He soon starts dateing Alice, and finds it"s just not the same with her as it is with Edward. At first he feels guilty and tries to avoid being alone with Edward, but he just can't.


When Jasper returns to Forks five years later, he's surprised to learn that his mother knew about him and Edward. I love how Susan is written, she's the mom everyone wants, Warm, loving, yet she doesn't take any crap and constantly tries to get Jasper to face his past and either move on or fix it. She asks Jasper to play guitar for her not realizing he didn't bring his own. Rose tells him she'll find one he can use and he doesn't question it, until he see's it. Then he knows...

"I closed my eyes, letting a few more tears slip down my face. "It's Edward's guitar," I whispered and then I couldn't talk anymore, because my nerves were wrecked. My breath came in short spasms as I fought desperately to hold it together.

Mama sighed. "Let him go," she whispered.

"Fuck...Mama," I sobbed and then everything exploded out of me. My body shook as the waves of pain rushed through me. I buried my face into my mother's shoulder and cried. I cried because I was so fucking stupid to let him separate me from my family. Blaming him for that was ridiculous, it had been my choice not to come back to Forks for five fucking years. I cried because I was going to lose my mother and there was absolutely nothing I could do about that. I cried because it still hurt, because no matter how much I fucking hated him, I had to admit to myself that I still loved him."


This story is told in flashbacks, and it's very well written and easy to follow, not always easy with this type of storytelling. There is alot of angst, but it's so worth it in the end. All of the characters are very well developed and you feel like their friends or acquaintances you know really well. It's such a quandary, you know Jasper and Edward shouldn't be doing what they're doing because they're both dateing other people. But honestly what they have together is so rare and deep that you see Alice and Bella in the way of that. When Bella finally finds out it's heart wrenching, not because you feel bad for her, but you see how defeated that leaves Edward. He truly loses a part of himself when Jasper leaves, his life definitely does not end up like he planned. They truly start out as two confused boys who fall in love and really don't know how to handle it. They're both very innocent and naive in the ways of the heart. They don't realize the hurt they're setting themselves up for.

"My eyes fluttered shut when Edward ran his tongue over my lips, wetting them. I gave in and let my body relax as I settled down on his chest. After five minutes of heavy kissing and tongue action, I came up for air and flipped the light on. Edward's half-lidded, lust filled eyes stared back at me. I was in serious trouble.

"Please don't say anything Jasper," he pleaded.

I pushed up off him and moved back to my side of the bed. "You've got to give me something," I whispered.

He rolled on his side encouraging me to do the same. I watched as his hand splayed across my chest, coming to rest on my heart. I'm sure he could feel my heart pounding against my rib cage.

He squeezed his eyes shut. "I've never...fuck," he hissed and clenched his jaw. "No one has ever made me feel like you do."

He looked so fucking tense and unsure. I needed to reassure him that we were both in the same boat. I placed my hand over his. "You scare the shit out of me Edward Cullen."

He gave me a small lopsided smile and rolled over on top of me.

"So, can this be our secret," he asked, pinning me beneath him.

"Who the fuck am I going to tell," I asked, raising my eyebrow.

He snorted. "When the night comes, you're mine," he said and lowered his lips to capture mine again. This time it was soft and slow, with a lot of teasing and tasting. God he tasted so good and I couldn't get enough."


Edward makes the choices he does because he feels like he owes it to everyone else to make them happy. His choices crush him and Jasper, and five years later neither are living, they're mostly just surviving. Neither seems to be able to find happiness, mostly because they had it and stupidly let it slip away. Jasper is so broken, there's so much he has given up trying to forget Edward. His mom makes him see all this, she forces him to look at it from Edwards side, and see the whole picture. She makes him realize that love is not something you can just go out and replace. She shows him a picture, of two boys obviously in love, when they thought no one else knew but them. She shows him it's more important to find love and happiness, and not worry about who it's with.


This fic is complete, and the end is perfect and bittersweet. I've read this story 3 times now, and honestly I could read it again. It's just one of those stories where you just want to characters to find their happiness and do whatever they need to do to make it back to each other. Give it a try, it will leave you wanting more. Banner by JA Mash.













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Can You Hear Me? By Jasper1863Hale

Sunday, April 15, 2012.
        







 Can You Hear Me?
By Jasper1863Hale
Jasper is new to Forks and due to an accident when he was younger, he is a mute. Luckily a certain Cullen is there to show him the ropes and help him to communicate. AH, Slash, M for lemons. *2nd place winner 'Most Promising WIP' The Torch Awards*
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Jasper/Edward http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7476890/1/Can_You_Hear_Me

The story starts out on Jasper's first day at a new school, Forks High. He's gone to many different schools over that past few years. At 14 Jasper was attacked by a dog and now is unable to speak. He knows sign language, but unfortunately his father or Pa as he calls him, isn't very good with it. He feels very isolated, no friends, no family, other than his dad. He's always the new kid. Always alone.


When he goes to the office to check in, he finds out a student has been assigned to help him find his way around. That student is Edward Cullen. He's fluent in sign language which is a first for Jasper. His father has tried to learn, but usually Jasper has to write out what he wants to say. He's thrilled that he can communicate with Edward. Things heat up really quickly between these two, there's attraction, but much more. Jasper's excited to finally have someone he considers a friend, someone who he can really talk to. He's really attracted to Edward, and soon finds out that Edward feels the same. Jasper's emotions get to him and Edward is there for him, I love how he is so sweet and caring for a boy he hardly knows.....


"He began lightly rocking side to side as he held me and I cried against his shoulder, soaking his shirt worse than the rain had. A gentle rumble began in his throat and it took me a moment to realise he was humming along to the classical music coming from his stereo. He just held me for several minutes until I cried myself dry.

Feeling embarrassed, I raised my hand and wiped at my eyes as I eased my way out of his arms and back into the seat. I had known Edward less than two hours and here I was crying on his shoulder. But what surprised me more was that he didn't object. He had held me until I was done crying. He had comforted me and somehow I knew he was willing to listen, to let me talk everything out, and would be there to help me through.

*I'm sorry, Edward.*

'Don't be. I told you this is good. You've obviously been holding a lot in all this time, you need to let it go.'

*You won't judge me for anything will you? I hardly know you, you hardly know me but, I feel like I can trust you.*

'You can, Jasper. Now, when you feel like you're ready, then let some more out. Talk to me, tell me anything and everything.'"



There really is an edge to this story, some of the other kids can't resist picking on Jasper, he's bullied and taunted daily. Finally they get him alone one day and beat him really badly. Edward finds him and the next thing he knows he's waking up in the hospital. This is a big turning point in Jasper's life, he decides that he's had enough. His Pa's first reaction is to find somewhere else for them to move to, but Jasper is having none of that. For the first time in his life he tells his dad how he really feels. How he's tired of constantly moving, how he has friends here. How he wants the kids that beat him up to know he's not afraid and he's not leaving....


"If you want to go then go. I'm not moving again, we've only been here over a week. I'm done with running from things, I'm not running away this time."

I had never in all my life spoken or signed to my Pa in such a manner before. I could tell from his expression that he wasn't amused by my disobedience and his tiredness didn't help that either. As he spoke, I was already typing my rebuttal.

"Jasper, you're being unreasonable and I don't appreciate your tone. Now get ready, we're leaving."

"You think you know what is best for me, but you don't. Every time someone kicks my head in, you take me away to somewhere else and it just starts all over again. Well, I'm not leaving this time. For the first time since the accident I finally have some friends and they're standing by me through this. They're accepting me for what I am, it's what I need. I don't want a life of constantly running away in fear, I want to stay here where I have friends who support me. If you want to go then just go, I'm staying here and I'll make do somehow, but I'm not leaving."


I really like how this story is playing out, Jasper has so much stacked against him. He just wants to be treated like a normal boy, have friends, fall in love and be happy. With Edward in his life those things just might happen. Edward is so kind and caring, always ready to let Jasper lead. And always there when he needs support or just a shoulder to cry on. It's fun to see all the new things Jasper experiences, he hasn't tried to play sports since his injury and he realizes he really likes trying. Since he always wears a scarf to cover his scars, it makes things a little difficult at times. But He seems to be willing to try almost anything. It feels like he's finally ready to start living his life.



This story really is told very beautifully, I can't tell you how many times I got choked up over Jasper and his circumstance. It's hard enough being a teenager, but to try and go through High School not being able to communicate would be so tough. He's been bullied constantly and ended up in the hospital on numerous occasions. He's never had a boyfriend, or any friends at all. It's easy to see why he would want to try to start a life in Forks. Jasper1863Hale should really be proud of this story, she's doing a great job along with her beta KellenCougar. Check it out this wonderfu, you won't be sorry.

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A Life for a Life by @LoveofaWriter

Monday, April 9, 2012.


Author: mkystich
Pairing: Bella and Edward
Rating: M
Type:  WIP
Summary: Could you give up anything, and everything, for someone you love? I did. I gave my life to save the one person I knew I couldn't live without. And I gave it to the Beast.

It takes quite a lot to get me to start a new fic these days. 
Original and interesting premise – check
Characters that are flawed but have redeeming qualities – check
A fascinating look or twist on the characters we know and love – check.

The story A Life for a Life is one of those stories that seemed to suck me right in.  I met Mkystich during a WC some time ago, and when she teased her story, I was mesmerized by the snippet she showcased.

The story’s premise is one of mystery and intrigue.  Where Charlie and Edward are at odds over Carlisle’s recent demise.  It takes a couple of chapters to figure out why Carlisle died and why his son Edward is so hell bent on revenge.

When Edward comes to kill Charlie, Bella offers herself up as an offering instead.  An eye for an eye, a life for a life. Edward takes Bella up on her plea to do anything to save her father, including being taken away by ‘The Beast’, or Edward’s bad side.

I know, you may be saying to yourself that his sounds just like some other story you maybe have read, where Bella falls for her kidnapper, except that it isn’t.   Yes, she starts to fall for Edward, but there are reasons why this doesn’t feel like any other kidnapping fic I’ve ever read.

First, the mystery draws you in.  You want to know what happened between Charlie and Carlisle to make Edward turn into the man he now is.  There’s also the connection that Bella and Edward have.  They knew each other in the past, and as the mystery unravels you find yourself rooting more and more for Edward and begin to dislike Charlie more and more.

I don’t want to give too much away, but I’m really enjoying this story, especially with its weekly updates and shorter chapters.  Both good for my lack of attention span. 

Hope you give it a shot.
Until next time,

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Blindfolds and Truth or Dare by: Astridt244

Saturday, April 7, 2012.


Pairing: Seth/Bella
Rating: M
Warnings: Lemon
Status: One Shot

This one Shot uses the rare pairing of Seth and Bella. This pairing can be tricky to write, but when done right it's gold. This One Shot is GOLD!

Astridt244 or "Ast" as the Author is known as, in fan-fiction has written a one shot that is clever, funny and hot!

Blindfolds and Truth or Dare
Bella knew she shouldn't have come to this overnight party. But did she ever listen to those instincts? Nope. Bella Swan has zero sense of self preservation. Which is the reason why she is sitting in a circle, in Quil's living room, playing Truth or Dare with the entire pack and their imprints.



Embry got an odd twinkle in his eye and smiled. "I dare you to put a blindfold on, get in the closet, and wait for a pack member to join you. You both have to stay in there for ten minutes."
"You have got to be kidding me!" she yelled.
"Nope... aww, don't tell me poor little Bella Swan is scared of the big bad wolf."

Before she could muse over it, she heard the door creak open; an intense presence filled the small space. She fidgeted in her spot, unsure as to what she was supposed to do. The party seemed to resume without them, the music blared, the beat thumping against the wood.

 If you're looking for a quick and 'fulfilling' read, check out this one shot, you won't be disappointed.
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Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella by @LyricalKris

Thursday, April 5, 2012.


 Alice's Jasper,Edward's Bella by LyricalKris
Summary: Bella had lost everything, including her purpose in life. Jasper had lost everything, including his freedom. Prison is an unlikely place to find happiness again, but two broken souls will recognize each other in the most unexpected of places.

Welcome to my first review on Tiwfic Reviews. When I find a story I love, I try to pimp it as hard as I can. Why? It deserves it and so much more. I know, I'm gushing, I'll control myself. So, of course, when I signed up to do a post for this site, naturally this fic came to mind

And since I'm new, I decided to do this post a little different. I got the author herself to sit down with me and answer a few questions. I'm a fan of everything she has written, so this was  pretty cool for me.

What gave you the idea for this story? And why did you want to write it?
There was a Cullens incarcerated contest. There are only so many ways I can imagine the Cullens ending up in prison.I screamed the entire time I wrote it. But it wouldn't leave my head until I did.

It was a hard story to write? I killed Edward!!

(My comment):I think I've killed them all at one point.

Yeah, but that was a first to me. And I killed him on their wedding day...

 Why a Jasper/Bella pairing at the end? Well, that was the premise that occurred to me. Their love was based on the fact they both understood that half of their soul was gone.

 Do you think you got everything said that you wanted the readers to know/feel from the story?Oh yeah. I might have over done it! Lol

How so?
Well, there were more scenes than necessary to tell a succinct story. It's not bad, just... It should have been a full novel if I was gonna delve into additional stuff.
  
Will it ever have any more chapters?Nope. Done with it.
 
And finally, anything you want to say to your readers and fans? Seriously, every review, every alert, every person that reaches out on twitter... I'm endlessly grateful.

 Thank you for being such a great sport! This kind of stuff makes my day!

All in All, I had a blast getting to talk to Lyricalkris, and peek behind the curtain on one of my favorite stories. I'm adding a line from one of my most loved parts of this story, and if you haven't read it, do so as soon as you finish this post.


The last bit of fear and trepidation crumbled, mere specks of dirt in the face of the mountain that was his love and his longing for his mother. He took the remaining steps toward her and pulled her into his embrace. Her hands went to his chest, gripping his shirt in her fists. He could feel her shaking against him with the strength of her sobs. "My boy. I'm so sorry. I just...I thought I had lost you forever, and when I heard your voice that first time... I couldn't live through losing you again, Jasper. I just couldn't."

"I know," Jasper assured her, his voice hoarse with emotion.

They stood together for a long time, squeezing each other. A mother and son mending frayed, but never broken, bonds without words. They had both made the mistakes, but they were mistakes borne of them both doing what they could with what little they had after their lives had shattered so completely.

When their tears were spent, they stepped away from each other, but only enough so they could walk without tangling limbs. "Come on, Momma," Jasper said, tugging her arm. "I want you to meet my family."

The smile that spread over Maria's face then was wide and full of teeth - an exact mirror image of her son's.
Jasper led his mother into his home. As she always was, Bella was waiting for him - their son in her arms. 

Jasper wrapped one arm around her waist, pulling her to his side while the other arm wrapped around his mother, pulling her close as well. Maria lifted her hand to touch her grandson's cheek, tentatively, and Masen did not shy away from her, though he looked at her curiously.

Holding his past, his present and his future in his arms, Jasper wondered vaguely if any man had been as lucky as he was. It was true that he knew the pain of losing everything, but he also knew the glory of finding it all again.

Frankie
 
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Rocket Science by Dragontattoo75

Tuesday, April 3, 2012.
Rocket Science by Dragontattoo75
Waking up after a night out, Jasper finds his work and personal life collide in a way that will change his life forever. 'When it's my turn to go, will I have a family sitting around me, holding my hand' AH/Slash
Twilight - Rated: M - English WIP
Jasper wakes up groggy and not feeling himself, is he sick? He works as a Registered Nurse, so he's around sick people all day. He's so out of it he's not even sure what day it is. Then he remembers, he went out drinking last night. Some people from his work were going out and he joined them, something he doesn't do very often. He really doesn't remember much of last night. He calls his friend Alice, and she tells him he met someone. Did body shots with him, then Alice rushed him out and threw him in a Taxi before he could get into trouble. He still doesn't remember anything.



He goes to work the next day, and is holding his breath waiting for someone to mention something he did while out partying. Nobody does, something he's very thankful for. He goes to meet a new patient, a Mr. Carlisle Cullen. He's got a serious health problem, and will be here a while. When Jasper checks on him on his next shift, there are a few more family members there, one of them seems familiar but he has no idea from where. Jasper is very compassionate and helps them through this terribly emotional time, he tries to be there for them all, and makes sure Carlisle is as comfortable as is possible, in the little time he has left.


It's a year later, and his friends from work want to go out. His friend Alice wants to celebrate meeting her boyfriend Seth a year ago and they want Jasper to go. He makes sure he eats this time, not wanting to repeat last year's experience. Then he sees Edward Cullen....
This could be somewhat awkward for me, meeting them here when we're partying and we've only met each other as nurse and relatives in a very sensitive situation. If they recognize me from the ward, would they want to talk to me about what happened there?
"Oh, Jasper, there is that guy you danced and did body shots with a year ago!" Alice says excited. "The one in the green shirt!"
"What are you saying Alice? It was him I did body shots with? I don't believe you." The situation gets ten times more awkward for me.
Seth confirms it, "Yeah, I recognize him too, Jasper. I had to help Alice peel you off him and get you home. You were so drunk you couldn't take care of yourself that night. We took a cab to your place and put you to bed before Alice came home with me." He looks lovingly down at Alice, clearly remembering their first night together.
I can admit Edward's good looking when I see him here and I'm not at work being his dying father's nurse. If this were the first time I had seen him, I would certainly have noticed him. I remember thinking when I met him at the hospital I'd seen him somewhere before. I believe Alice is right.
All of us are staring at Edward when Alice suddenly takes my hand and drags me over to him.


They dance, and talk a bit. But just when they finally sit down to spend some time together, they're interrupted repeatedly. Until finally Alice and Jaspers' other friends drag him home. He feels like the fates are against them. And maybe one of his friends. Things are not as they seem with Jacob. He may want more from Jasper than he's willing to admit. Jasper thinks of Edward constantly. Having given him his number he waits for him to call....and waits...and waits. Finally he gets a text from Edward asking him out on a date.


He goes to Edward's place and Edward cooks him dinner. They talk and end up having a really nice evening. Jasper finds out Edward has a 9 year old daughter, Lily. And an ex-husband Sam. Edward has alot of anger and hurt toward Sam, which makes Jasper feel sympathetic. Having a child together then having to share her must be tough.


Edward is very guarded, he has been hurt so bad by Sam. He's hesitant to let Jasper in, but he doesn't want to lose this chance with him either. They hang out at Edwards and watch movies, and get to know each other better. They start to date regularly, Edward goes to Alice's housewarming party. At Alice's party, Edward sees Jacob and lets him know that he's with Jasper now. This doesn't sit well with Jacob. And even though Jasper was very clear with him that he's not interested, Jacob tries to cause trouble for Jasper.

 
I love how this story plays out, it starts as Jasper being there in a very trying time, for Edward and his family. I think Jasper comes into Edward's life at a very important time for him. Edward is very hesitant, Sam has said things to him that have stolen some of his confidence. He thinks he has to be guarded in the way he feels for Jasper. There's a darkness to him that I love. It's like you can tell he's holding his emotions in check but he really struggles with it.


His love for his daughter is really sweet, you can tell she is his world. When he's finally ready to let Jasper meet her it is such a sweet chapter. Lily is such a quirky kid. Jasper is so taken with her, and she's so blunt with him. I think she shocks him a bit at first, but she's just straightforward like her Dad.


This story is 10 chapters long and there's only the Epilogue left, so you wont be kept waiting long for the end. Dragontatoo is very good at updating and has another story going that is just as good. It's called Consequences of Confessing your Fantasy. Malice Slashover is her pre-reader and Sue273 is her beta. The lovely banner is by JA Mash. They're a great team, check it out you won't be disappointed.

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Twas the Night before Christmas, Cullen Style by @Mandy52799

Monday, April 2, 2012.


http://mandy52799.blogspot.co.uk/2012/03/twas-night-before-christmas-cullen.html
Pairing: BellaxEdward
Rating: M
Status: Complete
Warnings: Very naughty humour. Lots of giggles. Not to be read if you’re easily offended.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7631053/1/Twas_the_Night_Before_Christmas_Cullen_Style

Twas the Night Before Christmas, Cullen Style by @Mandy52799

Summary: Carlisle perverts a Christmas classic. See what's going on in and around the Cullen house on Christmas Eve. This is just for shiggles. M for really dirty humor, smut, and mistreatment of forest creatures. Vampire/human. AU. CPOV.

Mandy is one of my favourite people on fanfiction. Not only is she an amazing person, and an incredibly talented banner-maker, she’s also a great author. And this hilarious poem further proves just how versatile she is.

'Twas the night before Christmas, when all through the house
Vampires were stirring; each fucking their spouse.
The stockings were tossed o'er lampshades without care,
As Rosalie screamed "Oh Emmett! Right there!"
The pixie was nestled all snug in her bed,


Despite it not being Christmas, this one-shot is perfect to read at any time, and never fails to put a smile on my face. We’ve all wondered exactly how Edward managed to control himself and never lose control during the years before he met Bella, and then again once he had met her. And Mandy gives us a great answer, which poor Carlisle has to witness.

And Edward with his brooding, and a ripe human snack,
Had just talked her out of a roll in the sack,
When out in the forest there arose such a clatter,
I sprang from my mate to see what was the matter.
Away to the window I ran super fast,
I'd tear them to shreds for ruining this ass.
The moon on the breast of the new-fallen snow
Gave the sparkle of mid-day to a vampire below.


I’mgoing to keep this review short and sweet, and not ruin it for you by revealing anymore of Mandy’s well-crafted verse. It will only take you a minute to go and read, but will lift your spirits and leave you with a lot of laughter, and a great fic to rec and re-read!

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