Pairing: Paul/Bella
Status: Multi-Ch. Completed
Rating: M
Warnings: Language, Sexual Content
Link:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7281242/1/Not_Again
KaiaLuna's Not Again is a 14 chapter completed Story that is unlike anything I've read before. She uses the character of Victoria in a new and refreshing way, jump starting the path of this story.
She gives an entirely different perspective of imprinting, and what it's like to be an imprint. She offers insight into established characters and created several original characters that you feel you've known since the Saga began.
The characters and their personalities, reactions and sentiments are spot on, and you feel as though you could react in the same way. The story line is fresh, and realistic. The lemons are hot, the anger believable and the conclusion works. This is a wonderful example of FanFiction.
From the first word, to the last word, you will be enthralled.
From Chapter One
I felt my heart rend into another jagged hole. I thought that they had obliterated my heart. I was wrong. I loved Jacob. Maybe not the way he wanted me to love him, but still as truly and deeply, as it is possible to love. They had torn a hole in me, the jagged edges cutting deeper all the time. Now there was a new hole, the one my best friend had punched through me. How many holes could a person live with? It felt like I was physically holding myself together at times and now it hurt just to breathe. I ran into Quil one day, he was alone now to. Both Jacob and Embry had gone to Sam. We became friends of a sort. He had a thing for Angela who was still dating Ben Chaney. I never wanted to date again. Never wanted to care about anyone, or hear the false promises of always and forever. It was all lies. Love was a lie. I was broken. There were only two people I spent any time with now, Angela and Quil, and I was as prepared as I could be for the day when they both left me to.
Charlie rarely spoke to me. He had been on my case about Jacob for a while until one day I couldn't take it and I screamed at him, how his precious Jacob was the one who didn't want anything to do with me. How he had lied and broken me. When Charlie brought up my mother, I told him if he didn't want me then he could send me to live with Renee but the moment he put me on the plane I would never be back. He never brought up Jacksonville or my mother again. I cooked our meals and did all the same things I had before but Charlie ate in the living room and that was the only time we interacted at all. The rest of the time I saw him only in passing.
Then one Saturday I had plans with Quil, I went to First Beach but he never showed. As I walked back to my truck, I saw him walking across the street with Sam and his boys. I closed my eyes and swallowed back the tears.
"Goodbye Quil." I whispered the only thing I could say. He was lost to me now. A small hole split open in my chest one that would grow a couple weeks later when I saw Quil pick Angela up from school. Sam had taken her too. She broke up with Ben and Quil would pick her up everyday. She still tried to talk to me once or twice but I knew I had lost her. I spoke to no one now, going from school to home, studying, doing housework or sitting, staring out the window into the woods. I didn't bother to pretend and Charlie could do nothing. I was eighteen.
From the first word, to the last word, you will be enthralled.
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